Hello Wonderfolks!π€
This post is in response to Sadje’s Monday Prompt.
She, uncommonly started writing,
her emotions turned into stunning sentence,
began to
express the unexpressed,
wrote that she left unsaid.
He, as he usually do,
And this time too…
Stood far apart, adoring her.
He, wished to wipe off,
the Tears,
that rolled down her,
rosy cheeks.
She, folded the Letter
and creased the ends,
inserted it into an envelop,
that had no sender’s and
receiver’s address either.
In the hope that,
it reaches it’s destination,
she placed it gently on his
Coffin.
And, whispered:
I loved you; I will love you!
He, replied:
I love you too, my Beloved, from Heaven.
Thank you so much for reading!π
For those who are new to my Blog, here is the link to The Letter #1.
Oh heart breaking your beautiful
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Sorry typo .. heartbreakingly beautiful
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Emotional. Painful.
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It is…β€οΈ
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A beautiful and poignant poem. Thanks for joining in the challenge.
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Thank you so much ma’am!β€οΈ
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Youβre welcome π
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Wonderfully expressed π
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Thank you Priya!β€οΈ
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Wow nice
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Thank you!β€οΈ
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Oh heartbreakingly beautiful. Great job with the prompt
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Thanks a lot Shweta Sis!πβ€οΈ
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You are very welcome π
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Emotional..
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Aww!π₯Ί
Thanks for reading Akshiβ€οΈ
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Beautifully expressed!!!
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Thank you so much Era!!β€οΈ
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My pleasure βΊ
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Very emotional poem. I could imagine the whole setting, as I read through the lines..
Three cheers for your portrayal.
Many Tears for her
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Thank you so much for this lovely comment Sir!
This means a lot to me…
Although, it’s completely imaginative it touched people’s heart…π«β€οΈ
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True. A poet who can write down other’s feelings is exceptional..
Writing down our own feelings is a normal vent.
Kudos.
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This is actually my second poem…
I made an attempt to write for a prompt last Sunday, the person who hosts the prompt said me that my take was a Free Verse Poem. So, that’s the first ever poem I wrote.
I’m slightly proud of myself seeing you call me a Poet, Sir.
Thanks for taking time to comment.π
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So sad and so beautiful!
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Thanks a lot for reading ma’am!β€οΈ
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My pleasure! π
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Second poem.. great going.. please send the link to first poem also.
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Thank you Sir!π
Here’s is the link: https://wp.me/sbYliw-fairy
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This is so beautiful and touching ππΌπ§‘
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Thanks a lot Jude!πβ€οΈ
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Very much my pleasure Ramesh. Is Hema okay?
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Yes, people call me Hemaπ
Ramesh is actually my Dad’s name…π
I don’t have a surname!
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Alright, cheers π₯
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Its emotional and its heartbreaking.
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It really is…π₯Ίβ€οΈ
Thanks a lot for reading β€οΈ
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Amazing post! Love it! Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you so much for reading!β€οΈ
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Touching!
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Yes…β€οΈ
Thanks a lot for reading!π
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You are welcome, Hema. π
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Wonderful art
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Thank you so much!β€οΈ
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Beautiful…. β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thanks a lot!β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Heartbreaking. I love the tone of this poem! Wow.
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Thank you so much, Rishika!
It means a lot!β€οΈ
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It touched my heart deeply….amazing ending….beautiful heartfelt poem
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Thank you! It means a lot…π
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You’re welcome Hemalatha
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Oh… jabs the heart with an arrow dipped in honey. Lovely!
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Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a sweet comment!
Keep visiting!π
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