New day, new morning,
noticed a new strand of
Grey Hair.
Is that unfair? She asked.
Just a reminder,
that we’re turning old,
but our Love is always
a Fine Gold, he replied.
Served him brewed coffee
along with chocolate cookies.
Seeing him wonder about the
unusual combination,
“Weird but a cute one as us”, she blushed.
As they turned older,
she always found a
new way to love him.
This post is in response to Linda’s SoCS Prompt.
The last stanza was the first thought I had after seeing the prompt. As I began writing it in my notebook, I stringed the words that popped up and this is the outcome.
Thank you so much for reading!๐
Nice ๐
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Thank you!๐
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Lovely โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ
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Thank you, Sukanyaโค๏ธ
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Nice poem, keep up the good writing.
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Thank you so much, ma’am!โค๏ธ
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Lovely
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Thank you ma’am!๐
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WOW, love this!
Also coffee and chocolate cookies isn’t that weird, its tasty
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Haha๐
Is it? I felt it would sound weird but taste good as few relationships (like people having contrasting characters)
Thanks for reading, Aanyaโค๏ธ
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Yep!
MY pleasure!๐
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Oh this is fabulous, finding new love in old love ๐
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Thank you so much, Secret!โค๏ธ
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Awww… The last lines is truly a bliss. ๐
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Thank you so much, my Sissy!๐โค๏ธ
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I really like the final Line ๐ nice
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Glad you liked it!
Thank you, Nehalโค๏ธ
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Nice one Hema ๐
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Thank you ma’am!โค๏ธ
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Wow…amazing hems!
Old is gold… Hahaha!
The poems are really getting better… Keep rocking hems!โค๏ธ๐ฅ
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A beautiful poem filled with emotions ๐ fantastic ๐๐ป
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Thanks a lot, Dulcyโค๏ธ
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Very touching
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Thank you!๐โค๏ธ
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Hi hema!
I find that many times u write to prompts.
I am surprised to see how you let your imagination spin from a prompt.
And in this regard, i am an absolute zero because no one can prompt my brain to create.
I admire your capability.
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Hello Sir!
As I always say, your comments give me extreme happiness. Thank you so much for your apprection, Sir.
I neither have control over my thoughts. I’ve to wait for my brain to produce thoughts.๐
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Very sweet and warm post! ๐
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Thank you so much, ma’am!๐โค๏ธ
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So lovely post๐๐ค. Love it.
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Thank you so much!!โค๏ธ
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Aww, this is so cute. โฅ๏ธ
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Lovely writing!
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Thank you!โค๏ธ
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You are welcome. โค๏ธ
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I want this kind of relationship ๐ฅบ๐
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I want too…๐ฅบโค๏ธ
Thanks for reading, Niniโค๏ธ
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Beautiful ๐
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Thank you, Era๐โค๏ธ
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Beautiful Hemaโคโค
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Thank you so much, Sissy!โค๏ธ
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Ohh. Such a cute poem, Hema. I loved it
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Glad you liked it! Thank you so much, Sis!โค๏ธ
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Splendid ๐๐
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Thank you so much, Shanky!๐โค๏ธ
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Its so wonderful to grow old in love and yet feel it to be new. Beautiful poem Hema ๐
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You are right ma’am.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.๐โค๏ธ
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So sweet ๐๐๐
But I love brewed coffee with chocolate cookies๐๐๐ am I getting old??
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Thank you so much!โค๏ธ
Haha, no sissy! I felt it sound sound weird but taste good together like couple with contrasting characters have good understanding…๐
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โAlways found a new way to love himโ beautifully written da Hemaโค๏ธ isnโt it lovely to see old couple so much in love!!
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Thank you so much, Akka!
Of course, it is lovely to see them together. I found it difficult to choose a picture to add here since all of the old couple pictures were so so beautiful!! They were so cute as babies pictures!โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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The way for happy living โค๏ธ
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Yes!โค๏ธ
Thank you so much for reading and commenting ma’am.๐โค๏ธ
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Very good
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Thank you!๐
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Beautiful. So romantic the imagery is.
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Aww!โค๏ธ
Thank you so much, ma’am!๐
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Welcome ๐ ๐
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Hoping to experience this โค๏ธ *cue music Grow Old With You by Adam Sandler* ๐
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I hope too…โค๏ธ
Thanks for reading, Jo!๐
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It’s lovely! ๐ And coffee & choco-cookies are a good combo! ๐
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Adore this ending! Oh my! Beautiful!!!
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Aww!!๐
Thank you so much for reading!โค๏ธ
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A very kindly thought post. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.
Signedhttp://www.welovetheoldestparents.com
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I’m so glad that you liked it.
Thanks a lot for reading.๐
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