
New day, new morning,
noticed a new strand of
Grey Hair.
Is that unfair? She asked.
Just a reminder,
that we’re turning old,
but our Love is always
a Fine Gold, he replied.
Served him brewed coffee
along with chocolate cookies.
Seeing him wonder about the
unusual combination,
“Weird but a cute one as us”, she blushed.
As they turned older,
she always found a
new way to love him.

This post is in response to Linda’s SoCS Prompt.
The last stanza was the first thought I had after seeing the prompt. As I began writing it in my notebook, I stringed the words that popped up and this is the outcome.
Thank you so much for reading!π
Nice π
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you!π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely β£οΈβ£οΈβ£οΈ
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Sukanyaβ€οΈ
LikeLike
Nice poem, keep up the good writing.
https://swarnaz.com/
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much, ma’am!β€οΈ
LikeLike
Lovely
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you ma’am!π
LikeLike
WOW, love this!
Also coffee and chocolate cookies isn’t that weird, its tasty
LikeLiked by 3 people
Hahaπ
Is it? I felt it would sound weird but taste good as few relationships (like people having contrasting characters)
Thanks for reading, Aanyaβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yep!
MY pleasure!π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh this is fabulous, finding new love in old love π
LikeLiked by 5 people
Thank you so much, Secret!β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awww… The last lines is truly a bliss. π
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you so much, my Sissy!πβ€οΈ
LikeLike
I really like the final Line π nice
LikeLiked by 2 people
Glad you liked it!
Thank you, Nehalβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice one Hema π
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you ma’am!β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow…amazing hems!
Old is gold… Hahaha!
The poems are really getting better… Keep rocking hems!β€οΈπ₯
LikeLiked by 2 people
β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
LikeLike
A beautiful poem filled with emotions π fantastic ππ»
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot, Dulcyβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very touching
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you!πβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi hema!
I find that many times u write to prompts.
I am surprised to see how you let your imagination spin from a prompt.
And in this regard, i am an absolute zero because no one can prompt my brain to create.
I admire your capability.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Hello Sir!
As I always say, your comments give me extreme happiness. Thank you so much for your apprection, Sir.
I neither have control over my thoughts. I’ve to wait for my brain to produce thoughts.π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very sweet and warm post! π
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much, ma’am!πβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
So lovely postππ€. Love it.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much!!β€οΈ
LikeLike
Aww, this is so cute. β₯οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely writing!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you!β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome. β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
I want this kind of relationship π₯Ίπ
LikeLiked by 3 people
I want too…π₯Ίβ€οΈ
Thanks for reading, Niniβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful π
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Eraπβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
ππ€
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful Hemaβ€β€
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you so much, Sissy!β€οΈ
LikeLike
Ohh. Such a cute poem, Hema. I loved it
LikeLiked by 2 people
Glad you liked it! Thank you so much, Sis!β€οΈ
LikeLike
Splendid ππ
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you so much, Shanky!πβ€οΈ
LikeLike
Its so wonderful to grow old in love and yet feel it to be new. Beautiful poem Hema π
LikeLiked by 2 people
You are right ma’am.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.πβ€οΈ
LikeLike
So sweet πππ
But I love brewed coffee with chocolate cookiesπππ am I getting old??
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much!β€οΈ
Haha, no sissy! I felt it sound sound weird but taste good together like couple with contrasting characters have good understanding…π
LikeLiked by 1 person
βAlways found a new way to love himβ beautifully written da Hemaβ€οΈ isnβt it lovely to see old couple so much in love!!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much, Akka!
Of course, it is lovely to see them together. I found it difficult to choose a picture to add here since all of the old couple pictures were so so beautiful!! They were so cute as babies pictures!β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
π₯°
LikeLiked by 1 person
The way for happy living β€οΈ
LikeLiked by 2 people
Yes!β€οΈ
Thank you so much for reading and commenting ma’am.πβ€οΈ
LikeLike
Very good
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you!π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful. So romantic the imagery is.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Aww!β€οΈ
Thank you so much, ma’am!π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome π π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hoping to experience this β€οΈ *cue music Grow Old With You by Adam Sandler* π
LikeLiked by 1 person
I hope too…β€οΈ
Thanks for reading, Jo!π
LikeLiked by 1 person
It’s lovely! π And coffee & choco-cookies are a good combo! π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Adore this ending! Oh my! Beautiful!!!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Aww!!π
Thank you so much for reading!β€οΈ
LikeLike
A very kindly thought post. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.
Signedhttp://www.welovetheoldestparents.com
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m so glad that you liked it.
Thanks a lot for reading.π
LikeLike