
You adorn the velvety dark sky
and hide all your cry.
Gave us hope –
“You’re a Stunner”, praised my Telescope.
You’re a proof that –
Beauty lies in all shape,
and don’t you blush when being gaped?
Though surrounded by trillion stars,
you outshine,
all of them with, own Shine.
Your Lunar phases
are more beautiful than fake faces.
You are my happy pill,
to the Insomnia, curing all ill.
Standing alone,
you shimmer as a bright Moon.
Thank you so much for reading!🙂
Beautiful!
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Thank you, Aanyaaa!!❤️
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Well penned..loved it⚘⚘👍👍
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I’m glad you liked it!
Thanks for reading, Ananya!😇❤️
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My pleasure🤗🤗 stay blessed.
Keep penning⚘⚘👍👍
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An amazing poem written in a positive and motivational way 🙂
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Thank you so much for your feedback!😇❤️
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Here is a well written science poem. 🥰
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Oh, yes Sissy! This is having many words associated with science. Deep inside, I’m still a science student.
Thank you so much for reading!❤️
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you so much, Sukanya!!❤️
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Stunning! ❤️🦋🌀
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Thank you so much!!!😍❤️
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Splendid❣
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Thanks a lot, Shanky!!😇❤️
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Loved it 😍
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I’m happy hearing it!
Thank you so much, Era!😘❤️
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💙🤗
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Splendid hems!!
Even you are outshining in your own way!!!
Way to go buddy!❤️
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Awwwww! Thank you so much!!❤️
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Beautiful post! Love the way you use the words to express your inner thoughts
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Thank you so much, JoJo, it’s a big compliment to me…😇❤️
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This is unbelievably cleverly written and beautiful. Have you heard of spillwords? please submit this if you don’t mind. I love this!
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OMG!!😍
Thank you so much for this comment.
I have heard of Spillwords but never thought that this is worth publishing, I’ll surely submit this. I’ll happy if they publish it, I’m extremely glad seeing this comment itself.😄❤️
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Trust my word, but most importantly, trust yourself. I look forward to more of this, and please submit it. 🙂 🙂
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Your words are so encouraging!! I mean it!
I’m surely submitting this!😇❤️
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Thank you so much!
Have a lovely day.
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Your words are mesmerizing
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Awww!!
Thank you so much, ma’am!❤️
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“Your Lunar phases
are more beautiful than fake faces.”….magnificent….being true to oneself….as in being real to others
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True words!
Thanks for reading, Navin!😇❤️
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My pleasure, Hemalatha ✨❤️
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I really love reading poems that includes nature like (sun, moon, rain, stars, clouds, etc…)
This poem definitely had a positive vibe, and I felt that it connected well with the moon. Love the picture too!
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Hey, Ashiq!
This is my first poem that’s not a response to any prompts. So far, I had been writing poems as a response to prompts. I had a slight hesitation before publishing it but I’m happy seeing lovely comments!
I’m glad you felt the connect and I love poems related to nature too.
Picture credits goes to my Friend.😇
Thanks for reading!
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It’s hard to write poems when you don’t have a clear topic to base it upon. Good Luck!
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True that!
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Amazing poem Hema! You write so beautifully that you make everyone fall in love with your poems😍❤️💯☺️
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Awwwww!!
Anjali, your words are melting me❤️😍❤️
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!😘❤️
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Aww that’s so sweet. 🥰😄
It’s my pleasure dear!🤗🤗🤗
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That’s a great poem Hemalatha 👍🤝
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Thank you so much, Sir.😇
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Gorgeous writing! ❤️
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Thank you so much, ma’am!!😇❤️
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My pleasure, dear. 😊
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This is amazing! Thank you for sharing! I loved reading this!
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Thank you so much!!❤️
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A very interesting write up. I like these unexpected lines: “Your Lunar phases / are more beautiful than fake faces.”
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Glad you liked them. Thanks a ton for your feedback!😇❤️
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Welcome!
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Such a lovely poem! Beautifully penned 💕
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Thank you so much, ma’am!😇❤️
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Beautifully penned, Hema!
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Thank you so much!!😇❤️
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My pleasure 😊
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Beautiful piece ❤️
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Thank you so much, Dear!❤️
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Good work hema. Congratulations on your first poem without prompts. Well done.
Nature is a great book. You have a great opportunity to write upon. She is never bereft of new ideas and new ways to look at things and mesmerize your readers.
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Sir. You always comment when I’m desperately in need of positivity.
I agree you, nature is a best topic to write on. I’ll surely make more attempts to write on the same topic.😇
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That’s a beautiful poem Hema. Loved it! ❣️
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Thank you so much, ma’am!❤️
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Nice poem Hemalatha..
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Thank you so much, Sis!❤️
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True.. Beauty lies in all shapes❤️👏🏼
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Absolutely!💯❤️
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Guten Tag Hemalatha.
Dein verdecktes Gesicht
Deine Seele
muss heller scheinen
als ein Fixstern
am nächtlichen Himmel
Herzliche Grüße
Hans Gamma
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How kind you are! Thanks a million for such lovely words. I’m flattered!
Thanks again!🥺❤️
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