
Argh! My mind and this place are twinning. Both- deserted and abandoned; reminding me all that I wish to neglect.
This harsh reality transformed me into a drunken poet whose words bleed claret red.
I just hope that you refill the blankspace.
Okay, atleast we are under the same sky.
This post is in response to Deb Whittam’s 50 Word Thursday .
Thank you so much for reading!🙂
Beautiful take on the prompt and that’s a lovely poem.
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Thank you so much, ma’am!!❤️
Btw, is this a poem?😅
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Ha ha I read it like one ☺️
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❤️❤️
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Beautiful take dear little 👩🦱💕❤️
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Thank you so much, Sissy!!😘❤️
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Beautiful take!🤩
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Thanks a lot, Adharsh!😇
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Beautiful thought ❤️
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Ashish!❤️
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My pleasure! 😊
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Fabulous 👍🏻👍🏻
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Thank you so much, Dulcy!❤️
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💛💛
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Wardah❤️
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Hema, lovely poem! ❤ All the best! Cheryl
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Thank you so much, ma’am!😇❤️
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Era!😇❤️
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💙🤗
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You’re getting better at this after every single post! Really Amazing!!!
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Awww!😍
Ashiq, thank you so much for reading and leaving encouraging comments. It means a lot to me.😇
And how did your first poem turn out?
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Oh yea! About that, I tried out a few poems.
You know how I previously told you about poems on nature, I wrote one on weather which came out decent. However, I don’t feel like putting it on the blog since it’s not related to India or Tamil in any way. I can DM it to u on Instagram if u want to read it. But don’t have high expectations lol!
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Oh…that sounds great!
Do send it to me I would love to read it.😄
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I sent it to u on insta!
Sorry for the late response 😬
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
YOWZA!
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Thank you so much!😇
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YUPPERS!
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Excellent composition!
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Thank you so much, ma’am!❤️
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Beautiful piece ❤️
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Thank you, Dear!❤️
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I think harsh realities make me a drunken poet too. Love it!
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Oh, secret!🥺
Thank you so much for reading!❤️
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Amazing thought!😍🤗
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Thank you, Anjali!❤️
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Your welcome!🥰
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Beautiful 💕
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Thank you Ka!❤️
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😍🥰
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This is such a beautiful take! Love love love it!
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Thank you so much, Sis!😘❤️
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The ocean has its limits in the beach
The beach has its limits in the thorny man made fence
They are broken, rusted
Some one has strayed into the beach
Leaving their undisturbed tyre prints
Even as the ocean strayed into the beach
Creating an U-bank
As the Sky watches.
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Profound one, Sir!!
This is excellent and suits the picture absolutely well.💯
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🙏Inspired by you.
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That’s an honour to me!😇
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Oh many minds works in this way, beautiful composition
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Yes!
Thank you so much for reading, ma’am!😇❤️
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Lovely poem da Hema❤️
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Thank you!❤️
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you!❤️
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Lovely! 🌸
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