
I always wondered who would,
give back all the love I shower,
you defeated my mirror.
You say,
I rebuilt the ‘madman’ in you,
to a passionate poet.
You bewitched my heart,
with beautiful flattery
and impeccable poems.
Everyday, a thousand times,
I fall for your words, love and the hazel eyes.
Prompt used: Bewitched from Eugi
Thank you so much for reading!🙂
Deep
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😍❤️
Thanks, Nehal!
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Wow! Too good!
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Thank you so much, Sis!!!!🥰❤️
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Good one Hema!👏
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Thanks a lot!❤️
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💖 Beautiful!
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Thank you so much!!❤️
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Loved it 👩🦱❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you, Sissy!!🥰❤️
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Wow!
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Thank you, Akshita!❤️
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Wow simply amazing
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Thank you so much, Pavi!💕
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That’s quite a deep poem.
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Is it?!
I actually thought it was very simple.
Thanks a lot for reading!🙂❤️
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When I read the poem, it’s very simple….but when I sense the words….their meaning, it’s simply beautiful & deep….carving the madman into the passionate poet…love is magnificent
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Haha, yeah. It’s magnificent.
I’m moved by this comment. Thanks s lot, Navin.
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You’re welcome, Hemalatha!
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Lovely poem!
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Thank you so much, dear!
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Of course! 🙂
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Awesome 👌
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Thank you so much, Dulcy!💕
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Beautiful post!
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Thank you so much, JoJo!🙂❤️
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how bewitchingly romantic, well written!
Nice to meet you 🙂
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That’s a lovely comment!
Thank you so much.
And nice meeting you too🙂
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my pleasure 🙂
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I love, just love your poems, Latha! Somehow they always click with me. 💕💕
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Awwwwwwwwwww!😭❤️
I’m flattered! I’m in love with this comment. Thank you sooooo much, ma’am. I’m super happy and this is a proud moment too.😎🙈
Writing poems was my long time desire and I never expected that it would have good reach. I still feel great when people call me a ‘Poet’.
Thank you again!❤️
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That is the sweetest response to my comment, ever! I am so so glad that you liked it, everything I said was true, dear.
I totally understand what you mean, and that feeling should never go away, it is priceless. Keep writing, dear. 💕🤗🥂💙
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Hema..again a beautiful poem
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Thank you so much, ma’am!🙂❤️
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Most welcome Hema, please check Scenario 8 my post
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I saw the post yesterday and I think I was the first one to comment too…
Is there any addition? I’ll check the post once again.😊
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Nothing Hema, I saw and commented too
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Beautiful as always!😍
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Thank you so much, Ka❤️
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Ahaaa!!! Nice one Hema! Loved it! Well done poetess 😊👏🏼
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Thank you so much, ma’am!❤️
“Poetess”😱😭😍🙈
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Yesss my dear poetess, you are one! And awesome at it
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Thank you ma’am!
I feel as though I’m crowned, these words are indeed a crown in disguise!🥰
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You deserve it all and more 😊
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Renaissance
Of Love
Does
So
Much
More in
Words
Than
Body
Parts
Alone How
Far Love
Falls
How
Sad
Tears Dry…
Yes indeed ‘i
Am’ ‘That Poet’
But i Only
Give
TaKinG
Is For Others…
For my Words
Are Feather
Free in
Breeze in
Deed God is
The Feather We
Watch and At
Best
Become
Wind Free Seeing 🌬 💨
As Clouds Kiss
Far
Above
Below
A Stranger FRiEnD🙌🙏
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An amazing poetry. Thank you so much for sharing.🙂❤️
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Thanks so much
For Your Very inspiring
Poem😁🎶
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My pleasure! Thank you so much for reading it.🙂❤️
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😊Look Forward
To Reading More😁
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Stay connected!!🤗❤️
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Thanks for the
Kind Welcome🤗
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Beautiful poem.
https://swarnaz.com
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Thank you so much, Sis!❤️
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Amazing poem! Love this!
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Thank you so much!!❤️
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This one’s so beautiful, Hema 🙂
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Thank you so much, ma’am!!😊❤️
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You are blessed with amazing talent
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Aww😍
Thank you so much ma’am! It means a lot.❤️
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A trap you are aware of… 👌
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The trap I didn’t fall yet.
This is a fictional one.
Thank you so much for reading!😊❤️
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It was a fictional reply…
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Oh, sorry! I took it the other way.
I’m not able to visit your site can you share me it’s URL?
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http://www.AliveInCoffin.in
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Wow I love your words… 🤩🤩🤩
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Thank you so much, ma’am!🥰❤️
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The pleasure is mine. Pls don’t call me mam. My name is Raghavasree 🙂
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I expected this!😄
I’ll better call you Sis.
Your about page gave answers to all my questions, the reason behind dessertflower is so beautiful and deep. To be honest, the name attracted me and it led me to your interesting blog.
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That’s one beautiful poem Hema. Loved the use of words!
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❤️
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Thank you so much for reblogging! It means a lot!❤️
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‘You defeated my mirror’. Beautiful words.
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Thank you so much for reading, Sir.🙂
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Beautiful 🍁
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Thank you so much for reading!🙂❤️
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much for reading!🙂
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Welcome.
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great 👍🥰
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Thank you so much for reading!🙂❤️
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“Words well said to support love
is good
yet well done with actions to support love
is better-best to prove words of love
well done is better than well said.”
_Van Prince
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Oh, that’s a sweet comment. It’s a poem itself.
Thank you so much for reading.
🌼A warm welcome to my Blog🌼
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Thank you!
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“Words well said to support love
is good
yet well done with actions to support love
is better-best to prove words of love
well done is better than well said.”
_Van Prince
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I love poetry. It can express feelings so clearly in so few words…
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Hema,
Impressive. Highly Impressive.
Par Excellence…
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Amazing post!😁
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Thank you so much!!
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Your welcome!😁
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I liked the start, its beautiful, do check out this too, https://societalens.wordpress.com/blog/
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amazing. thank you for sharing.
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Thanks! Sure!!
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Wow incredibly beautiful. I absolutely love the “you defeated my mirror” line, and the “I rebuilt the ‘madman’ in you” I am here sitting with these words feeling all the feels. Thanks for the inspiration.
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Awww! What could else be a big compliment to a writer? I’m so glad that this intrigued feelings. Thank you so much for reading!❤️
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