
It was our first date,
I wore a red overcoat
and black stockings.
There, he is!
on the seventh table,
Seven is my lucky number,
I said to myself.
As I walked towards him,
I began recalling the pick-up lines,
I googled.
How should I begin?
Hi (or) Hello?
My mind was caught up in the maze of questions.
Hey Hazira! He said
My cheeks turned pink
without rouge.
He is the star I wanted to meet, my star, my only star, heart whispered.
We were gazing at each other
for a minute,
Is this being lost in love?
He began talking,
Caffè latte that we ordered
turned cold.
I felt warmth in those eyes
and his words were much warmer.
And yeah, feet were off the ground,
It is him, It is him,
heart kept saying.
It was a perfect day,
perfect start to a
lifelong beginning.
No more a Philophobic
rather a Philophile.
Love, transforms and
transformed.
_______________________
She recited the poem
that was written
3 years back
to her “second love”
in her womb.
As always, her heart was right,
it was the
first date, first love.
Life is perfect to some…
Thank you so much for reading!🙂
Wow! How elegant is that! The second part just made it beyond beautiful ❤️
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Thank you so much, ma’am!!🙈❤️
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Yeah, I just… melted… I think this may be the sweetest poem I have read in… I don’t even know how long, Hemalatha,
Thank you,
David
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Aww! Thanks a ton for the lovely comment, Sir. I’m glad that you felt my words.
Thank you!
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Hema, l loved this poem! At the age of 65, twelve years after my husband died., I began computer dating. None of the first dates worked out…until one of them did. We have been together for six very happy years. I don’t think I will get pregnant… I surely hope not! 🙂 🙂 🙂 But impending motherhood is a very sweet and touching ending to your lovely poem. ❤ All the best!
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Beautiful
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Thank you, Nehal!😇
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This is absolutely beautiful ❣️
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Thank you, ma’am!❤️
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The last pata made this more beautiful💖💖💖
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*para
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I so agree ❣️
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Thank you so much, Vani!🙈❤️
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Awww…. Gorgeous love it is! 🥰🥰. Loved this love poem. 😘😘😘😍😍🥰🥰💕💕❤️❤️❤️😍😍
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Haha, yeah!!
Thank you so much for reading, sissy!😘❤️
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Very lovely lines 💕💕
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Thank you, Shanky!💕
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Ha…you stole my heart ❤❤
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Your heart will be very safe with me.😌❤️
Thanks for reading, Sissy!😇
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Beautiful writing Hema ..
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Thank you so much, HS!❤️
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It made me all mushy & super gooey! Loved it, Latha, you sure have a way with poems. ❤❤
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Aww! Your lovely comments though!!😍
Thank you so much for your constant encouragement!😘❤️
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It’s always a pleasure to read your poetry, Latha. 🤗❤🥂
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The last stanza brought this all together! Beautiful, Hemalatha 👏💛
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Thank you so much, Wardah! I don’t know, but I felt that end could be perfect. I’m happy seeing people agreeing it!😄❤️
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It is perfect! You’re welcome! ❤
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Poem itself is written beautifully, but after reading the last stanza, it elevated the words above.
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Aww! Thank you so much!🥰❤️
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So beautiful 🥰!! If you ever decided to create a book selling your art, I’d be the first to buy it 💕
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Lash!🥺❤️
Never dreamt of writing a book. If I ever write one, you would the first person I inform!❤️
Thank you so much for reading!
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Oh wow, how can you write like this. Gives wonderful feel
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🙈
Thank you so much ma’am!!
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This is very heart warming ☺️
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Ah, thank you so much for reading!😇❤️
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The perfect bits always leave me with hope. Beautiful post
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Haha. Thank you so much for reading, Jude!
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My pleasure Hema🌼
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The last part is so beautifully written Hema. In fact the entire poem is so sweet
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Thank you so much for reading the posts, Nawazish!😍❤️
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Sorry I wasn’t notified of the post earlier….I read all the posts together now😅🙈
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Great first date. Beautiful Expression
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Definitely! Thank you so much for reading, Sir.
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Aww this is beautiful! Reminded me of falling in love!
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Aww! Thank you so much for reading, Ruh!🥰❤️
Fall in love…😌
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Wow, you are lucky, great blog ☺️☺️
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