
Might be because,
we were caught in
Labyrinth of lies.
Faced depression,
terrible heartbreaks,
unforgettable betrayals,
painful backstabbings;
infinite, broken and shivering promises.
We remained quiet,
chose silence, an escapism.
What gave us hope?
Nothing.
What connected us?
Our situation.
That’s a weird telepathy.
I treasure it.
Thank you so much for reading!π
” What connected us?
Our situation.” Most of the time true for us! Well expressed!β€
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Isn’t it?
Thank you so much for reading, Nawazish!β€οΈ
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Yup! My pleasure!π
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our situation !
that is always connecting us ..
well expressed πππ
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Yes…
Thank you so much for reading, Sir.π
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I don’t know why but this brought a smile to my face…
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I’m happy that it made you smile.π
Thank you so much for reading, Dear!β€οΈ
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Good one Hema!
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Thank you so much!π€β€οΈ
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Loved it π but I kept thinking that two broken people can be a dangerous connection. π¬
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Thank you so much for reading, Jo.π
I thought two broken people would have better understanding since they had been in such disheartening situations. I’m not sure! Sometimes I over imaginate thingsππ
Feel free to share your opinions, Jo…π
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Guten Abend
Wir sind in der
eigenen WidersprΓΌchlichkeit
gefangen
einsam und verlassen
nur das glΓΌhende Verlangen
das Sehnen
das Bild
das von einem anderen
in der Seele brennt
oder das der
Bosheit der anderen
nehmen wir gewahr
wie ein Kind
das die Wirklichkeit
des eigenen Lebens
noch nicht
wir selbst nicht
anerkennen wollen
Herzliche GrΓΌΓe
Hans
***
Good evening
We are in the
own inconsistency
captured
alone and abandoned
just the ardent desire
the longing
the picture
someone else’s
burns in the soul
or that of the
Malice of others
we become aware
like a child
that the reality
of your own life
not yet
not ourselves
want to acknowledge
Best regards
Hans
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Thank you so much for sharing this, Sirπβ€οΈ
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This is so amazingly written, Hemalatha! Sometimes we’re connected to others solely because of our situation, no matter how strange it seems, but it’s still a wonderful connection nonetheless. Beautifully penned! ππ
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Awwβ€οΈ
Thank you so much for taking time to read, Wardah. Your words are so true. Thanks again!π
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You’re welcome Hemalatha!! β€
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Beautifully written Hema β₯οΈ
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Thank you, ma’am!πβ€οΈ
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I really like your thoughtful poem.
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Thank you so much, ma’am. I treasure your comment!β€οΈ
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This is so well composed!
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Thanks a lot, ma’am.β€οΈ
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True dear. Well penned β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you so much, Sissy!β€οΈβ€οΈ
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I always look forward to reading your art!! π it really makes my day, Hema!
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Awwπβ€οΈ
Huge compliment!!! Thank you so much, Lash!β€οΈ
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Oh my….so we’ll written….beautiful connection….telepathy β€οΈ
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Well written *
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Thank you so much, Navin!πβ€οΈ
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You’re welcome, Hemalatha β€οΈ. Btw, do check my latest post…I asked my friend to translate the poem from hindi to English….whenever you’ve time πβ¨
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Woah!!! Amazing! I’ll check it immediately…π€β€οΈ
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I love your enthusiasm…π€β€οΈβ¨
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Thank you so much, Sissy!β€οΈ
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Love this! π
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I’m glad you liked. Thank you so much for reading!β€οΈ
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Beautiful ππ
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Thank you Anjuuuuuuuu!πβ€οΈ
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My pleasure!ππ₯°
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Beautifully written! β₯
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Thank you so much!β€οΈ
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Hema..Good Work!
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Thank you so much, ma’am!πβ€οΈ
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Most welcome Hema!
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Beautifully penned, Hema! Sometimes in life we come across people we solely get connected because the situation we find ourselves in. Itβs one of a kind relationship.
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You are absolutely right!
Thank you so much for reading, Nathi.π€β€οΈ
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Always my pleasure π and have a wonderful day!!
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You are a deep thinker dear β€οΈ
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Thank you, ma’am.β€οΈ
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Awesome.
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Thank you so much, Sir!
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This resonated so deep. One thing we all have in common is that we all have a story and that connects us, our situations.
Great one!
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Thank you so much for reading!
I’m so glad that you got the essence of the poem…π€β€οΈ
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The bonds that’re formed coz of same situation may seem strange to describe; but they’re some of the strongest, I’ve come to realise.
Loved it! π Well expressed!
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Aww! Thank you so much for reading, Priya Sis!β€οΈ
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My pleasure, sis π
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Well penned πΌπΌππ
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Thank you so much for reading, Astha!πβ€οΈ
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My pleasure πππ»
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Putting something so difficult to explain in such simple words is definitely a work of art. Very Well written ππΌ
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Aww! Those are such sweet words! Thank you so much for reading and taking time to comment.πβ€οΈ
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So real
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Thanks, Jude!π
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A deep pleasure ππΎπ
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Wish there was no telepathy between us and memories…
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Some memories are meant to be cherished, isn’t it?
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Humans are marvelous, to find that some they fight with their darkest moments…
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True! I agree.
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Humans who understand, keep them…
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